The Origin of Origins
In the beginning, there
were no traces of humans, but there was a galaxy with eight planets circling
around their ruler and mother-figure, the Sun. The Sun valued intelligence and
curiosity to learn very highly, and was always encouraging the planets to
explore and learn from the galaxy surrounding them. The sun, following her own
advice, had discovered how to create mankind, and she needed to find a safe place
for them to reside. She decided that she would invite all the planets to
participate in a competition that would test their willingness and ability to
think deeply and challenge themselves. The winner would follow in the Sun’s
footsteps and be the mother to all humans. “The rules are simple,” the Sun
said. “Each of you will be given a full day to create a star as big and as
bright as possible. The only thing I ask, as I am testing your mental stamina, is that you work on this challenge only within the allotted time. The challenge
will begin at midnight.”
Knowing that Earth would
follow all the rules and naturally was the most creative, the other planets
decided that they would all begin working on their stars early
and when they only had one hour left, they would combine all their stars into
one megastar. This would guarantee a win, as they would surely be able to create bigger and brighter star than the star Earth could
concoct in 24 hours alone. Earth, excited about the challenge took a nap and began
working on the star at 12:01. Earth worked tirelessly exploring all ideas that
might increase the star’s size and glow.
It became time to
judge the stars. The megastar glared so bright it hurt to look at, and was
massive compared to the star Earth had created. Suddenly however, the megastar’s
light went out and became a dark mass that revealed the imperfections of the
combinations of many stars. “You all deceived me,” the Sun said. “I know you
worked on your star before time had begun, which is a shame since you worked together
and created something divine. The evil within you conquered your mind and now
your star will remain in the sky as a reminder to all that temptation taints
your conscience. The megastar will now be Earth’s moon as Earth has won the
challenge.”
Earth’s star still
resides in the sky today as the North star, its light leading people all over
the world to explore new things. Also, as humans were put on Earth, they had no
knowledge of how or why they were placed on Earth. Therefore, every day, humans are forced to explore and come up with their own thoughts on their
beginnings. The Sun watches over Earth and "People are in the daylight
realm,"(Iroquois 173-174) in which they can learn and adventure the
greatness that surrounds them. But as the Sun goes down, humans and planets are
reminded of the results of temptation during, “the fearful realm of night,”
(Iroquois 176).


This was really fun to read. It follows the structure of the Iroquois myth, with a beginning world and an ending lesson, but also has its own unique parts, like a competition between the planets to see who would house humanity. The saying "cheaters never prosper" definitely has meaning here. Although, I want to know how the concept of time (like midnight) was established when said time is based on the night-and-day cycles on Earth. That's the only qualm I have; otherwise, it's a nice story that fits in with your theme that everything happens for a reason- a divine one at that (and the thing that is divine is the Sun from what I can tell).
ReplyDeleteJenna I really enjoyed your creativity in this origin story and how it was very different from anything we have read in class but still includes the concept of good vs evil between the Earth and the other planets. I also thought you did a good job connecting your origin story to the Iroquois story to tie it all together.
ReplyDeleteAll in all this was a fun read that was well thought out. I liked how you combined aspects of the origin stories we read in class (such as The World on the Turtle's Back and Genesis) with your own creative ideas and voice.
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